That was more than a game, I can't think of anything that took the mechanics and conventions of games and made poetry of them. Congratulations, it was very moving. (I think that's a pun).
Very cool game. The story, although I didn't fully understand until the end, was quite thought provoking. I did a play through on my YouTube as well! I hope you get some recognition for this game!
Hello ! I had an amazing time playing this game, discovering bit by bit (hehe) the meaning of it, the characters' stories, the hike though life.I'm always impressed by those games made with GB Studio, what a blessing !
I saw that a portugese person proposed to translate your game. I'm a Franch person and I can do it too in my language if you are interested.
Such a beautiful and moving game... The music did a very good job at setting the mood as well, it had me feel quite anxious at times as the story became intense! May I ask what your inspiration was for this concept?
Thanks for playing the game! I've had the idea of a character walking through time in the back of my mind for a long time. I let it take shape as I worked on it so it's hard to say what specific inspiration. Maybe a bit of Link's Awakening, Edith Finch or Outer Wilds?
Both the stories of Link's Awakening and Edith Finch (unfortunately I haven't played Outer Wilds) were very moving (and so sad!) as well. I think you have really managed to grasp similar strength their stories hold, and used it to tell your own stories. Do you plan to make more story games?
Okay last question. I make (branching) story games (in unity) too sometimes. What do you recommend to use to plan your stories? Do you write it in a document like google sheets or docs or do you use software like twine or yarn spinner? Keeping track of the story has always been a major challenge for me. What do you use?
I like how sometimes you are glimpsed, like by the dog, or when she was hurt, though I was a bit confused by "I'm not dead yet you vulture!" since it was said as you leave, so I thought at first that I was supposed to do something - it would have been clearer if it was said when you approach.
I like how much expression is in where people look, how they pause, start to do something and stop and such - the dog even looked old by the way he moved. I like how in the past that could have been, the past self glimpses the future self. I also like the climb up the mountain passing through the seasons of life - the arrangements of the scenery were able to make it feel very high up, even on the limited screen.
How many secrets are there? Is there ever anything in the two forest spots off the path?
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. There are about 6 or 7 secrets, depending on what you consider a secret. Some of them are very minor. The more 'major' secrets have to do with the river. I'll leave the forest spots a mystery for now...
this was really lovely. the way you used colours & screen transitions was very cool. when playing through i was surprised (and a bit unhappy) that a choice i made had a big impact since i didn't know it would, but then as i played through the way the choice presented itself made sense (and i like that this is brought up in the ending too).
Thanks! I'm glad the choice worked for you. If you didn't see and are interested, here is the process I went through trying to "fix" it and arrive at it's current form.
this is amazing! I love all the tiny details such as characters turning around to look at you and how the seasons change. thank you so much for making this!!! <3<3<3
If you like stories regarding life or "slice of life" genres this is definitely for you. I personally am more into action and fantasy, so this felt a bit slow for me, but I can definitely see how it can be a gem. Overall, it just depends on personal liking. Still, I'll admit it was rather cute and touching, so good work!
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That was more than a game, I can't think of anything that took the mechanics and conventions of games and made poetry of them. Congratulations, it was very moving. (I think that's a pun).
Very cool game. The story, although I didn't fully understand until the end, was quite thought provoking. I did a play through on my YouTube as well! I hope you get some recognition for this game!
https://youtu.be/4hKZg8StOHE
Nice! Thanks for for making a video!
Honestly i didn't understand the story
Interesting experience. I did a playthrough with some commentary on my youtube. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for making the video!
This looks so awesome. The graphics are incredible. I hope you get the support you need!
Hello ! I had an amazing time playing this game, discovering bit by bit (hehe) the meaning of it, the characters' stories, the hike though life.I'm always impressed by those games made with GB Studio, what a blessing !
I saw that a portugese person proposed to translate your game. I'm a Franch person and I can do it too in my language if you are interested.
My discord is FrenchCookie#8768
Best regards !
Thank you for the translation! The French version will be ready for everyone in a few weeks to a month!
Such a beautiful and moving game... The music did a very good job at setting the mood as well, it had me feel quite anxious at times as the story became intense! May I ask what your inspiration was for this concept?
Thanks for playing the game! I've had the idea of a character walking through time in the back of my mind for a long time. I let it take shape as I worked on it so it's hard to say what specific inspiration. Maybe a bit of Link's Awakening, Edith Finch or Outer Wilds?
Both the stories of Link's Awakening and Edith Finch (unfortunately I haven't played Outer Wilds) were very moving (and so sad!) as well. I think you have really managed to grasp similar strength their stories hold, and used it to tell your own stories. Do you plan to make more story games?
You can bet your firstborn I will!
Hahaha XD Looking forwards to it!
Okay last question. I make (branching) story games (in unity) too sometimes. What do you recommend to use to plan your stories? Do you write it in a document like google sheets or docs or do you use software like twine or yarn spinner? Keeping track of the story has always been a major challenge for me. What do you use?
I use a text file for most projects. To keep it organized I use indenting or my own hashtags to link related content of the file together.
Loved it. Felt many emotions throughout when I played it.
Very good story, sounds, and atmosphere!
I like how sometimes you are glimpsed, like by the dog, or when she was hurt, though I was a bit confused by "I'm not dead yet you vulture!" since it was said as you leave, so I thought at first that I was supposed to do something - it would have been clearer if it was said when you approach.
I like how much expression is in where people look, how they pause, start to do something and stop and such - the dog even looked old by the way he moved. I like how in the past that could have been, the past self glimpses the future self. I also like the climb up the mountain passing through the seasons of life - the arrangements of the scenery were able to make it feel very high up, even on the limited screen.
How many secrets are there? Is there ever anything in the two forest spots off the path?
Thank you for a very good story!
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. There are about 6 or 7 secrets, depending on what you consider a secret. Some of them are very minor. The more 'major' secrets have to do with the river. I'll leave the forest spots a mystery for now...
this art is great!
this was really lovely. the way you used colours & screen transitions was very cool. when playing through i was surprised (and a bit unhappy) that a choice i made had a big impact since i didn't know it would, but then as i played through the way the choice presented itself made sense (and i like that this is brought up in the ending too).
Thanks! I'm glad the choice worked for you. If you didn't see and are interested, here is the process I went through trying to "fix" it and arrive at it's current form.
absolutely loved the animals <3
it's very lovely, i really dig it!
Really great example of story telling without relying on graphics.
Interested in seeing what else the Dev will come up with
Thanks for making a video!
How can a game make me so sad and happy at the same time! This is a freaking masterpiece.
Amazing. This is a work of art. The emotional story is beautiful. Nearly everything about this game, I love.
The only problem is a few glitches. For example: Playing the woman, her hair would occasionally turn black.
Overall, 9/10.
Thanks for the feedback. The hair flickering was supposed to be intentional. I've removed it for now because several people thought it was a bug.
Holy cow you made front page! Proud of you dude!
Amazing game. I cried. Music is top tier, and I loved the twist on what the player character was.
This game is SO beautiful. I cried.
Very beautiful and emotional, the music is wonderful
wow, first, the start was very interesting, when you can move in the name of the game :). the scene was really nice too,
I wish I had more to say but I did enjoy it. Emotional ride!
welll made
This was just amazing. Really, really, really well done. Thank you for making this.
Thanks everyone for comments! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Beautiful
Touching and beautiful - great work! I hope you make more. Best of luck with the cartridge.
Incredible work! Really impressive use of limitations to focus the game and player experience
this is amazing! I love all the tiny details such as characters turning around to look at you and how the seasons change. thank you so much for making this!!! <3<3<3
Masterfully tells a touching story with so few words. The music especially adds to the experience. Well done!
really beautiful, thank you
BEAUTIFUL EXPERIENCE.
i like how the game is 100% story and 0% gameplay but still enjoyable!
I could almost imagine something like this as a Netflix show lol
Nice game
oooh interesting
Fantastic piece of art! Both technically impressive and emotionally heartwarming!
If you like stories regarding life or "slice of life" genres this is definitely for you. I personally am more into action and fantasy, so this felt a bit slow for me, but I can definitely see how it can be a gem. Overall, it just depends on personal liking. Still, I'll admit it was rather cute and touching, so good work!
Great game! Love the creativity and the end was very sad to me. The pixels also added something for me. Thank you.
this was amazing. first game I have finished on itch.io, and it was worth it.
what a beautiful bittersweet game